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Submit your pitch or website and get a one-page diagnostic showing where you’re losing clarity, and how to fix it.
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A fast way to see what’s not landing.
I review your materials (pitch deck, website, or written explanation) and send you a 1-page narrative diagnostic.
Clear. Structured. Actionable.
I review your materials (pitch deck, website, or written explanation) and send you a 1-page narrative diagnostic.
Clear. Structured. Actionable.
What this is
What you’ll get
Think of it as a map of what’s not working and where to focus.
Who it’s for
You, if:
you’re an early-stage founder preparing to raise or grow;
you have a strong product but struggle to explain it simply;
you’re building a pitch, website, or positioning;
you feel like your story “almost works” but not quite.
you’re an early-stage founder preparing to raise or grow;
you have a strong product but struggle to explain it simply;
you’re building a pitch, website, or positioning;
you feel like your story “almost works” but not quite.
How it works
- Submit your materials (deck, website, or short description)
- I review and analyse your narrative
- You receive a 1-page diagnostic within 48 hours.
Get your free
narrative diagnostics
narrative diagnostics
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Send your materials in the form below, and get a clear breakdown of what to improve.
Send your materials in the form below, and get a clear breakdown of what to improve.
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